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Icy wind slashed at his face and the rain danced it’s evil dance upon his head as he tried to get his bearing on the side of the isolated beach. Aaron could only hear waves of water building up higher and higher, All he could see was the lighthouse behind him, Aaron didn’t know what else to do. He brought the women he saw sitting up on a rock crying for help at shore back into the lighthouse. He thought he heard something weird outside… It was a pretty enormous storm. She couldn’t remember her own name, Something was wrong. The next morning when she awoke, Aaron was sitting there by her side confused and worried. Sally was bleeding all over, probably meaning that she was injured or attacked before she washed up onto the shore. Eventually Aaron and Sally got to know each other while Sally was continuing to learn the human ways. A few years went by and the same thing happened again, this time it was a baby boy balling at shore, Suddenly their dog Troy started to bark, ringing and resounding. Someone was knocking at their door. Sally was forced to go back to her town where she was never to leave again. Both Aaron and Jace never heard from her again. The year is 2021 and Jace started discovering the powers that his mother gave him because she was half meta. Jace was taught how to use his powers for the greater good by his mentor Brian who was also part meta. Later that night Aaron took his son to the smoothie shack, they both got a Strawberry and Banana smoothie same as always, and Aaron challenged Jace to a chugging competition “Whoever finishes 3 smoothies first wins. It was the first time that Jace has ever beat his father in a chugging competition in a while. His father giggled. He said, “I think it’s time to go home” While they were making their way outside Jace saw someone calling his name beside the smoothie shack Jace told his Dad to go back inside when I come to get you, then we'll get outta here. It was a girl, “My name is Olivia, she said, “So” Jace said, “You need to come with me back to your mom’s hometown to battle your brother to become the ultimate meta” “I’m not fighting him” said Jace, “If my brother wants to be ultimate meta he can I don’t wanna be ” I drove my Dad back home and then I realized that I could have visited my mom’s hometown and find out more about her maybe we can be reunited. I remembered that my mentor said you can always try but if you don’t want to continue, Jace hesitated remembering his trainer passed away the day after he finished his training, he thinks it was murder but he was told it was a suicide. His eyes filled with tears and he said to himself… “I’ll fight for Brian, Let’s do this” When Jace agreed to fight, Olivia gave him a special trident used to channel his powers “That trident doesn't change what you are, A Gigantic Beefy LOSER. I beat you once already, I'm easily tempted to do it again, The underworld will never accept you as the ultimate meta” said Jace’s brother. Both Jace and his brother swing their tridents at one another, they both missed, Mark dug his trident in the ground using it as a pole, he swung around it and sent Jace flying with a kick. He landed on his feet. Jace ran up to his brother and hit him so hard that his trident fell out of his hands, Jace took that as an advantage because without your trident you have no control over using your powers, Jace grabbed Mark and launched him almost hitting himself on the back of the submarine’s spinning blades behind them. Jace slightly shoved him back, rubbing his face shield onto the back of the submarine’s blades. Jace grabbed him again and threw him almost falling off the surface. Jace spun his weapon so fast that he got water on his trident, one of his powers and he kept on spinning it. Mark tried to hit him but Jace was too strong. Jace chucked his weapon at him and it smashed Mark, his trident went flying back into the air. Jace jumped up, grabbing his weapon from the air and broke his brother's trident into pieces. Jace has now become the ultimate meta and was reunited with his mother. Now that Jace is the ultimate meta his mother is now leaving her town forever! Before Jace brought his mother home, his Dad was pacing a hole in the floor. When he saw Sally he couldn’t believe his eyes, He bursted into tears of joy as he saw Sally standing right infront of him with his family reunited. The End
I really like your story. It was a very detailed story and you used a lot of descriptive words.
I was swimming in the ocean then I heard a scream. It was coming from ahead so I went to check it out and as I swam towards the scream the waves got bigger and bigger I was struggling to keep my head above the water. Then I saw 10 large sharks circling around something, me being as curious as a blind person when they hear something. so I went to check it out even thought I could barely keep my head above the water I was to curious about the scream then a very large wave swept me up in the air I saw a small and ugly person she must have been so ugly the sharks thought she was a fish then I hit the water causing a big splash and the sharks herd it so they all came after me and got me right on my leg it was gushing blood. Then they started to bring me underwater and took me to an underwater city and just dropped me on the bottom of the ocean towards the underwater city. Then a very tall and strong person walked up to me and he was furious “what are you doing here boy”he said in a loud and angry voice “taking a swim” I answered I knew it was a smart alec answer but I didn't really care. Then two sharks came by and took me to a weird place. I was still badly injured from the bite. The day after I woke up in a cell. The two guards were talking and they both had guns so I snuck up on one then I grabded there guns and shot them both in the head killing them instantly. After they hit the ground I grabbed the key to escape and opened the door to the cell. Then I started walking out of the city but the king saw me and attacked me then just before he got to me to bullets went right through his head after he was on the ground bleeding and dead. It wasnt me so who was it I started looking then I saw ace ventura he shot that fatty right in the brain after thanking ace. I started swimming away and when I got to the surface I noticed the waves were even bigger. Then the biggest and most frightening waves I have ever seen threw me up in the air and I hit something hard like a rock. I thought I was dead then I saw people. The wave had thrown me back to shore. I was as happy as a little kid on christmas. So I ran home and went to bed
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