Tiger rider...

11/15/2020

Connor

5/13/2021 07:21:11 am

Here is the reading link:https://voca.ro/1hCyDjfUJjKj

“You won’t get away with this, My brother will save me!”
(1 day earlier)
We had just woken from the sound of a big tree snap in half like it was a twig, we were scared and confused so much that our legs would not move. Are fearless leader Ace told us to start running and that he would stay in a tree to see what was after us , he said “meet back at the cliff side 15 hours from now”.
We all knew what the bad guys were after, it was Ace because Ace was one of the great, great grandchildren of the most powerful person to ever walk the Earth, so you could say he is seeked out for his power. There! Ace had spotted the bad guys and there was something that would scare him forever, they were using the powerful beasts to their advantage, how Ace thought. Ace was thinking the bad guys were going to steal from the campsite but no, they were in pursuit of Jake and the others which scared him,
(15 hours )
We met back at the cliff side but Ace saw something that was wrong “w-wheres J-Jake,”
Ace said nervously , “they got him,”
Said rob, h-how could this happen Ace thought , “ we have to get him back, ‘’Said Ace.
(one day latter)
“You won't get away with this, my brother will save me!”
“Just hush up and keep to yourself,” said the bad guy
The next day Ace came up with a horrible idea, he said that he was going to trade himself for Jake, it was crazy but then he said that we have to take out other bad guy bases and that he was going to take out the bad guys from the inside. So we traded and before you knew it.
(12 hours later)
We have already taken out four of the five bases and Ace is close to escaping the bad guys are almost taken DOWN! Then we heard a big boom and the entire base was blown up by Ace, I mean he is one of the most powerful people on this Earth, but just like that we had taken down most of the bad guys. The remaining bad guy came out to the field where we were standing and they started charging so we charged back. About three quarters into the battle we had already taken down 250 bad guys and only 50 more to go and then Ace takes won swing of his sword and boom they are all knocked out it was amazing to see his power in real life, About one hour later we had them all tied up and left them to be judged by the animals. Then the world was finally at peace thanks to us.

Tyler

5/14/2021 07:15:09 am

I really like how you used discripive words and the use of your qutations.

Ethan

5/14/2021 07:13:18 am

I really liked your story, and it related to the picture so well that as soon as I looked at the picture and read the story, I saw the relation.

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