“5. 4. 3. 2. 1! Ready or not, here I come,” Fiona yelled out into the murky forest. She started running around the wooded area looking for her friends. It’s been a long 3 minutes and she hasn’t found anyone. She’d been playing in these woods all her life, she knew where all the good spots were, yet she still couldn’t find her sneaky friends. “Guys? It’s not funny anymore. I’m serious. Come out,” She screamed with concern in her voice. “Guys?” She repeated. No answer. This time she was extremely worried about her friends. She turned the corner of a tree and couldn’t believe what her eyes were seeing. A door, in a tree? Nah. She’s never seen this before. She blinked and rubbed her eyes. It was still there. She stepped closer to the creepy door. She hesitated to knock on the old rotting door. She decided she would. She knocked on the door three loud times. KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK. On the third knock the door creaked open. She looked inside. It was all clear. She took a deep breath and walked inside. The floor creaked creepily. She gaped at what she saw. Oh no. Oh no no no. It couldn’t be. It couldn’t. It wouldn’t. It was. Her friends, lifeless in the next dark room.
that was very good, i like the description and detail you put into it. i also like the dramatic ending.
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