Caught!

10/16/2020

Morgan

10/19/2020 07:23:29 am

We were being lowered into the vault and as i was grabbing cash and gold I knew it was a risky move and then i was for sure it was a bad move when a cop came to close up! He walked into the vault we were caught oh no what the heck where we going to do. So i thought as fast as i could and climbed back up my rope the cop went up the stairs to catch me but little did he know i opened the door for him to think i went out but i just jumped right back though the hole and ran all i could think about was the fact of oh no police are here my plan could not have backfired on my anymore then it just has. Ok ok breath where did john go when we were on our way he said something think monica think “ if we get caught just remember i will be up on your right” so i look up on my right who do i see john so we catch them as they come in we sneak out they must be new or something they are rusty. We took a dark black car and raced up town and we never got caught. (5 years latter) john hide the kids cops are here john turns around with a terrified face he can't seem to catch is breath they open the door with a bright smile i say hello officer how may i help you they walk in to our home and show the surveillance footage from the night and we dinie everything and then………. Feel free to continue

izzy

10/20/2020 06:31:58 am

I really like how much detail you put in this is really good 😃🙂

Addison

10/20/2020 06:33:05 am

I love all of your creative details and I love how your story ends I kept on reading this over and over because it is so good!

Addison

10/20/2020 10:20:44 am

She woke up to a loud bang she rush to the room across the hall to wake up her roommate chad. What was that chad said with a nevus voice I don’t know said lea but we need to go check it out in to scared to go alone said Lea. They both walk down stares to see too mans in black next thing they know is CRASH “blink blink” chad slowly opened his eyes and woke up to see lea awake he tried to talk to her but her had some what of a rope covering his mouth so he count talk and so did lea the car came to a stop. The to mans in black open the 2 doors of the white white weird van they untied lea and chad. The short man said you guys have to rob this bank or else. Chad was going to regret what he just said but he still said it “or what” said chad. The tall man pulled out a gun and said OR ELSE lea and chad were so scared that chad almost peed him self and leas face turned white. Chad said fine but what bank? The short man in black showed Chad and Lea the bank why can’t we do any other bank said chad? Because this one has the most money said the tall man. Lea who's face was still white looking and the tall mans gun said “ok” even before Chad could say anything. Chad and lea went and changed into all black outfits and the to mans in black drove to the royal bank of Canada when they got their leas hand was shacking of fright and fear she didn't know what was about to happen…. They arrived at the bank the time was 3:29 the band was closed once again the too white door opened and their was standing the to mans in black say lets go get some money they were both so happy. Finally said the short man in black it took so long to get the door open the to mas said open the door then the to mans in black realised that they have just been fooled. Lea and Chad started run and then they bumped into their friends said they said why they were here and said that happened to them to and they did the same this on when chad and lea did they made a plan to escape and not get caught a few minutes went by and they had made their plan suddenly lea said their coming everyone hid and held their breath the to tall and short men walked around the room and didn't see anyone until……… Susie sneezed.

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