We were being lowered into the vault and as i was grabbing cash and gold I knew it was a risky move and then i was for sure it was a bad move when a cop came to close up! He walked into the vault we were caught oh no what the heck where we going to do. So i thought as fast as i could and climbed back up my rope the cop went up the stairs to catch me but little did he know i opened the door for him to think i went out but i just jumped right back though the hole and ran all i could think about was the fact of oh no police are here my plan could not have backfired on my anymore then it just has. Ok ok breath where did john go when we were on our way he said something think monica think “ if we get caught just remember i will be up on your right” so i look up on my right who do i see john so we catch them as they come in we sneak out they must be new or something they are rusty. We took a dark black car and raced up town and we never got caught. (5 years latter) john hide the kids cops are here john turns around with a terrified face he can't seem to catch is breath they open the door with a bright smile i say hello officer how may i help you they walk in to our home and show the surveillance footage from the night and we dinie everything and then………. Feel free to continue
I really like how much detail you put in this is really good 😃🙂
I love all of your creative details and I love how your story ends I kept on reading this over and over because it is so good!
She woke up to a loud bang she rush to the room across the hall to wake up her roommate chad. What was that chad said with a nevus voice I don’t know said lea but we need to go check it out in to scared to go alone said Lea. They both walk down stares to see too mans in black next thing they know is CRASH “blink blink” chad slowly opened his eyes and woke up to see lea awake he tried to talk to her but her had some what of a rope covering his mouth so he count talk and so did lea the car came to a stop. The to mans in black open the 2 doors of the white white weird van they untied lea and chad. The short man said you guys have to rob this bank or else. Chad was going to regret what he just said but he still said it “or what” said chad. The tall man pulled out a gun and said OR ELSE lea and chad were so scared that chad almost peed him self and leas face turned white. Chad said fine but what bank? The short man in black showed Chad and Lea the bank why can’t we do any other bank said chad? Because this one has the most money said the tall man. Lea who's face was still white looking and the tall mans gun said “ok” even before Chad could say anything. Chad and lea went and changed into all black outfits and the to mans in black drove to the royal bank of Canada when they got their leas hand was shacking of fright and fear she didn't know what was about to happen…. They arrived at the bank the time was 3:29 the band was closed once again the too white door opened and their was standing the to mans in black say lets go get some money they were both so happy. Finally said the short man in black it took so long to get the door open the to mas said open the door then the to mans in black realised that they have just been fooled. Lea and Chad started run and then they bumped into their friends said they said why they were here and said that happened to them to and they did the same this on when chad and lea did they made a plan to escape and not get caught a few minutes went by and they had made their plan suddenly lea said their coming everyone hid and held their breath the to tall and short men walked around the room and didn't see anyone until……… Susie sneezed.
There was once a kid named Aaron with a very very strange family. He had a very strange sister. She was always up to something. Sometimes not very big but sometimes big. One day Jennifer said to her mom “I’m going out with my friends” so her mom said “ok bye” then Jennifer left. What Jennifer's mom didn’t know is that she and her friends are going to rob a bank! She and her friends went to the local bank and started to rob it. The alarms went off and the cops were coming. But they just got out and are the getaway driver. The cop started to chase them but they got away… They are in the middle of the forest and don’t know what to do. So they started to drive out of the forest Aaron’s mom got very worried because Jennifer wasn’t coming home and she wasn’t picking up the phone. Aaron’s mom was shocked when she found out on the news about people robbing the nearest bank. Aaron and his best friend get very suspicious of Jennifer because they heard Jennifer say “hahaha we're doing a lot more than just hanging out”. She also saw masks and things that you need to rob a bank so Aaron and Jason started to look for her. They hiked for a long long time until they found their sister and her friends. Jennifer jumped out of her seat as soon as she saw him. “W-what are you doing here?” said Jennifer. “Were here to arrest you” said Jason and Aaron with a ton of cops behind them. A few minutes later the cop has Aaron’s sister in handcuffs and Jennifer said ”when I get out i'm going to take everything from you!!” So the boys go on a ride home by the police and their mom’s were so surprised at what Jason Aaron and Jennifer did. A few years go by and on the news Aaron looks at the news and it says Jennifer has escaped from area 51 and she is heading right for Aaron… Aaron starts to panic so he calls Jason. They started to suit up for Jennifer. They get metal plates on the chests and after about an hour they are all ready. They still have a lot of time before she gets here so let's have fun. So they went to Aaron's mom and got some money and went to the ice cream truck. Then they got slushies and had a very fun time. The only bad thing is that they totally forgot about Jennifer…. Jennifer got here and said”Now I will take everything from him”. Jennifer had to look for Aaron and Jason until she found them sitting eating their slushies. “Ha I found you” said Jennifer. “Oh no” said Jason and Aaron at the same time. They started to bike away as fast as they could but Jennifer chased them. She was a lot older so she can ride faster. Aaron had one thing that he loved so much. It was a piggy bank that his dad gave to him right before he died. So Jennifer took off somewhere else and Jason and Aaron were very confused. So they decided to follow her. It led to Aaron's house and that’s where Jennifer picked up the piggy bank. “No don't do it please” said Aaron and just when she was about to spach it Jason did chough the piggy bank and something happened to Jason. He had an enormous pain in his brain. It turns out Jason has a brain tumor so the cops got to the house and held Jennifer down while they rushed Jason to the hospital. But Aaron saw Jennifer coming so he ran out the hospital and ran to Jennifer Aaron pushed Jennifer so hard she got sent back to the forest. Aarons eyes turned yellow with lightning pulsing out of his eyes. He got a flashback to his dad and he had to fight alone. He jumped at Jennifer and knocked her out cold. Then he waited for the cops to come and she was sent back to the prison and never got out. The end for now....
I really liked your story, it had a lot of great action and excitement!
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