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EMMIE
10/21/2020 06:40:31 am

It was my time to get out of this place. I couldn’t live in mouse town anymore. My family didn’t agree with me leaving at first, But it ended up the whole town coming….

“Steve can we go any slower” I say in a sarcastic voice. “You know for a mouse you sure have a lot of stuff” He says. “You know you should be happy I am getting everyone out of this town, we all hate it” I exclaim. You must be thinking what was so bad about this town, well there is nothing bad its just the- MOST BORING PLACE EVER! There are the turtles which are fun, especially Steve but other than that nothing.
“Hello, Hello Tom? You are daydreaming again. We are at the river do you want to go right left or” “straight we go!” I say cutting him off. I know he hates when I do that.
I could see all the turtles trying to catch breath even though they are going 10 metres per hour! Steve especially looks very tired, he is right I do have a lot of stuff. I grab my microphone “EVERYONE STOP, I THINK WE CAN ALL AGREE WE ARE TIRED. LET'S CALL IT A DAY AND TAKE A BREAK”. I yell. I go up to talk to Steve, “are you alright” I ask. “Yes, but my leg really hurts,” Steve says. “I will be right back” I say. I grab the town doctor. “Dr. Mousey” I say. “Hello Tom, what can I do for you?” He says. “It’s my friend Steve, His leg really hurts. Can you maybe help him?” I ask with my fingers crossed behind my back. “Yes, of course Where may this mouse friend be” he says. “Oh he’s not a mouse” I say very proudly because most mice here only have mouse friends. “Huh” he says confused. “He’s a turtle” I say even more proud. “Oh, I can’t do that” he says. “Why?” I ask, my voice getting louder. “I only have mouse sized x-rays, bandages, band daids and frankly It would be too hard and how would I reach?” He says. I just walk away, that is so unfair. That night I went to bed thinking about how mice get healthcare but turtles don't? I have to do something about this…………….

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Addison
10/21/2020 09:49:36 am

(matt is chads best friend and chad is the first house) Up up up all the houses rised. He opened his eyes were am I said chad? He ran out of his house ah he looked down to see a huge turtle. He finally looked over to see 40 turtles beside each other and then he knew what was happing he rushed into his family room in his little house he grabbed the phone and called his best friend his best friend answered “hello” he said quietly? GO OUTSIDE HURRY said chad in a panic! His best friend went out side and dropped the phone “hello” HELLO” chad said worried? Did u fall? His best friend picked up the phone and said chad whats happing? Chad said slowly I don't know but chad did know he ended the call and rushed over to the turtle who was carrying his house and said Hi. The turtle answered Hello their little mouse. Were are u taking all the mice? Matt ran out side of his house to see chad talking to the turtle but before matt could talk to his turtle the turtle talked to him. The turtle said whats your name? Slowly in fright matt said my name is matt and whats your name? Lucy I like that name Lucy said matt. Lucy is their any way you could bring me over to that house right their matt pointed with his fingers sure said Lucy! Lucy walked over to chads house and matt backed up the he went for it. Thump with a hard landing. Ow said matt chad rush out side oh hi matt how did you get here? I jumped said matt well do you know were were going? Nope said chad. Well whats your turtles name my turtles name is Lucy said matt. Lets me ask him or her chad walked over to his turtle and said whats your name my names chad! The turtle answered my name is Susie nice said chad this is matt my best friend okay said Lucy all turtles stopped what happened? Were here. Were matt and chad asked? They both look up and this mouths opened were are we they heard a scream and that was the end but someone saved them but who they opened their eyes to see Susie and luck hurt they rushed over to them and asked what happened? Susie said with her last strength you guys need to leave and be safe hurry and the he head went down hurry said Lucy there isn't much time be safe Lucy said matt??? Oh no matt we have to go said chad.

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