DNA Mystery...

10/13/2020

You just sent in your DNA to one of those ancestry sites. After eight weeks, you can’t figure out why your results have not shown up. Then, two men with dark suits show up at your front door. They have some news regarding your results...
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morgan

10/14/2020 07:54:46 am

#1 You just sent in your DNA to one of those ancestry sites. After eight weeks, you can’t figure out why your results have not shown up. Then, two men with dark suits show up at your front door. They have some news regarding your results… I open the door and my heart is pounding. I can't catch my breath. I have know idea what to do or say so I say hello there sir. I regretted it the second it came out of my mouth. One of them said hello there, let me give this to you, go ahead open it, I looked up and smiled, keep in mind a scared one and I said ok and opened it. My results came back and were negative? I had no idea what that meant. They said your DNA is not valid so I am afraid we will have to stay with you until your new test results come back and I said “ new? “ And they swab my mouth and mail it off so fast I could not believe my eyes. 2 seconds later all of their stuff is in my house! How do they keep doing this. This will drive me crazy. What confuses me the most is I was tested negative for a DNA test. What the heck is wrong? (8 WEEKS LATER) the test is here omg omg yayayayayay *****opens it WHAT!..... To be continued anyone feel free to add on

Audrey

10/14/2020 10:48:01 am

You just sent in your DNA to one of those ancestry sites. After eight weeks, you can’t figure out why your results have not shown up. Then, two men with dark suits show up at your front door. They have some news regarding your results… The first man speaks "Excuse me ma'am". "Me?" I ask. As the other man nods his large mask falls on the floor with a huge clang. I jump with fright and yelp. The man, he had no face... Suddenly I feel myself falling, my head hurts as if someone hit me, everything goes dark…

I wake up with a jolt. I smell a horrible stench. I try to look around… It's all dark. I feel something on my forehead, It covers my eyes too. I think it's metal because it's cold and hard. voices echo in my head but I don't know whose they are. One is a deep voice the other is high and airy when I hear it I feel like I'm floating. Someone enters the room or so I think. He or she removes my blindfold and then I noticed I was chained to the floor.

"It's ok Cleo, Stay still" the tall, thin woman says. Wait my name is not Cleo, why did she call me that? "My name is Audrey" I mutter. She seems to take no notice yet through the mask her green or maybe blue eyes narrowed to slits. "No It's Cleo!" She says "You're not Audrey!" I frown then shrug. The woman confused me. "Can you take my chains off?" I ask slowly. I realize she too is wearing a mask and a dark suit. She approaches me with a slight smile "oh yes of course, if you stop lying to me!" "I know your name is Cleo," she continued.

I decide to pretend I'm this Cleo person because the chains are so tight my hands are turning scarlet. "Ok my name is really Cleo" I sigh. She approaches me, removes my chains, then she grabs me...

She started running and grabbed me by my wrist and dragged me. Wow she's strong. She sprints past large metal doors bolted shut, guards with huge needles and flickery lanterns carelessly hung on the dirty walls. "HEY YOU" A voice echoes upon the walls. Oh no the guard saw us... The woman runs even quicker out the door as the guard chases us and then hops in a car with blacked out windows and no steering wheel she beacons me to follow her in. I hesitate but the guard has almost caught up so I hop in her car and it starts lurching. I realize It's driving itself…

I try to peer out the windows but It's all dark. "My name is Betty'' she says. "And you should know you are a cat." I snort "yeah, nice joke" She pulls a paper out of her crimson tinted purse, then hands it to me…

I take it and it says- "wait, it says I'm a CAT?" Betty speaks "yep if you are wondering why I call you Cleo it's because it was your name before they kidnapped you and turned you into a person." She removes her mask and long blond hair sweeps out, I notice she has a small mouth and green eyes like creeping ivy. Her skin is as dark as night. Her hair is like beautiful golden stars. "And I need to tell you something," I nodd. Betty replies "you are not human" "I am!" I say. "No you are a cat" she says matter of factly. I snorted "Wow nice joke!" She speaks slowly "you really are." "I need proof" I say. Betty pulls a paper out of her crimson colored purse. "Your dna test." I take it…

Wait - It says i'm a cat! "This is crazy,'' I reply." "Indeed it is, Cleo and if you are wondering why I call you Cleo it's because It was your name before they kidnapped you." Betty continues speaking "If you want to ever get back to your original form we need to go back to the lab and steal your essence back." "This makes no sense I'm human!" I shout. "You are a cat." She says back. The car jerks and rattles then screeches in a sudden stop…

The door of the car opens and I get out with Betty. I can't believe my eyes, It's a huge mansion. "We are at my house now" Betty grins. We enter, The giant modern house is beautiful with all the windows and rooms. She shows me to a room with a huge bed and a dark wooden desk, the floors are carpeted with black fabric. The carpet feels so soft. The ceiling is large and made of glass!. "You can stay here tonight" I instantly fall asleep
I wake up and I'm craving fish right now my whiskers twitch as a tall figure with pretty goldfish colored hair enters the room, she looks familiar as if I've met her in another life. She picks me up and I purr, I fall asleep in her arms...

izzy ?

10/15/2020 06:39:13 am

I really like your story Audrey It is very good ! 😃😁

morgan

10/15/2020 06:42:26 am

this is amazing 😉 i love it great 👍 job

EMMIE

10/15/2020 06:53:52 am

that was so good!

Natalia

10/20/2020 06:50:19 am

OMG! That was so good! You are really, really good at writing!

Audrey

10/14/2020 10:55:44 am

I like your story :)

morgan

10/15/2020 06:43:19 am

thank you 🙏

EMMIE

10/15/2020 06:52:47 am

What!.......... They came back negative again! At this point I just think the men in the dark suits just want to live with me! It´s been so long I don´t even remember why I got a DNA test, oh yeah now I remember. A couple years ago my brother went crazy! He ran away from home and we never saw him again! People told me if I had more than 60% of his DNA I could go crazy too. Of course they took another DNA test and told me they had to stay. I was furious. It's already been 16 weeks. If I was going to go crazy don´t you think it would have already happened. Another week passed, I couldnt take it. I was going to go downstairs and tell them to get ou- what where did they go? None of their bags were there. I heard a noise coming from the basement, I walked down the stairs ¨hello” I said in fear. ¨hello” a familiar voice said………...

Mr. Else

10/15/2020 06:54:42 am

PLEASE continue!!! Is it the brother??

Kaylie

10/15/2020 07:06:54 am

You just sent in your DNA to one of those ancestry sites. After eight weeks, you can’t figure out why your results have not shown up. Then, two men with dark suits show up at your front door. They have some news regarding your results… you are a part of the biggest crime family in history they had not been caught for hundreds of years. My heart was beating so fast I though I was going to faint but instead I calmed down and asked “ what does this have to do with me?” the came closer and said they had received 50 life sentences the people back in the day decided that the generation coming from the Inucci crime family were to make up the life sentences. “ wait so I’m going for LIFE and I didn’t even do anything’ “ Well it sounds bad when you say it like that, but yes Brooklyn Inucci you are under arrest, Anything you say or do can and will be used against you in the court of law. But of course we aren't going to court strait to jail but by law I have to say that.” when I arrived I was cell mates with this creepy person who didn’t say anything when I came in she didn’t even look up that's when I realized that it was a plastic skeleton then I remembered that it was Halloween my cellmate then jumped out and scream happy Halloween. “Hi my name is Brooklyn Inucci, but everyone calls me brook. “Hi, my name is Taylor what are in for?” “ well my ancestors 50 life sentences. What are you in for?” “Um well, i’m in for the same thing everyone here is it’s more then a coincidence but we can’t tell anyone beside the guards” “ then we need a plan!” to be continued

Mr.Else

10/15/2020 07:57:08 pm

WOW, you guys are SO GOOD at this... You guys need to write movie scripts or something!

DNA Mystery...

You just sent in your DNA to one of those ancestry sites. After eight weeks, you can’t figure out why your results have not shown up. Then, two men with dark suits show up at your front door. They have some news regarding your results...
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You just sent in your DNA to one of those ancestry sites. After eight weeks, you can’t figure out why your results have not shown up. Then, two men with dark suits show up at your front door. They have some news regarding your results...
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